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Nice work. You certainly got the fear and desperation of the main character across, but moreover their resignation to their fate, particularly at the beginning and the end. As for the horror element, the fact you can see the timer ticking down on your skin is chilling, even if you knew the poor sap was dead as soon as he opened the envelope.

Also: A guy, in London, killing prostitutes, and eventually becomes famous for it?

Seems familiar...